BunBun comic pages 13-14

BunBun pages are all done. Tell me your thoughts/critique in the comments if you would like.
Cover and Back will be posted tomorrow

"I am working on a 14 part story of my BunBun and will be uploading them here to the blog. The work is on 24x18 inch watercolor paper, inked with India ink and a brush, and colored with watercolors."

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